A tree-high thought tuned to light’s pitch (Celan). The poet begins scanning the leafy branches, but there are no birds in Purgatory. (Thank God, all we need is another bird poem). What does the poet hunger for? He wants to peer through to find out where the voices are coming from. He is always reaching for the tree-high thought: he’s no ground-picker, no forager intent on filling his basket.
What does it mean to be a poet in the land of the gluttons? There’s a story here, in this canto, perhaps, about the poet in the age of information gluttony. As information becomes less and less nutritious, and more and more conducive to an empty obesity of trivia, the poet must grapple for the tree-high thought, the scent of the apple and pure droplet of dew. (He must be content with the wheel-barrow, and its redness, its glaze, and not clog it with dirt.)
Is there such a thing as gluttonous poetry? I’m drawn more and more these days to a more minimalist poetry, one that avoids volubility, that doesn’t brim the margins with chatter. I want a poetry like the emaciated faces of the gluttons, the skin of feeling taut on the bone of language. I want to the see the OMO (the homo, the person), the divinely carved glyph in every visage (31-33).
The poet changes register in this canto something like three times, I’ve read. He begins with the more colloquial medium style (dominant in Purgatory), a language for establishing friendship and trust; Forese, the poet’s friend we encounter here, speaks in a more chummy low style to the pilgrim, using diminutives for his wife Nella and a lot of possessives; and lastly the poet employs his high ‘expressionistic’ style, harkening back to the inferno, as he describes the skeletal and scabrous gluttons. Some of the best literature is the best literature because of its ability to employ a higher style while describing the most horrific or unusual things, and also the most common. One goes to poetry because he or she is nauseous with sound bites and status updates.
The poet does not fatten on bag-of-chips knowledge (though he really loves a bag of kettle-cooked mesquite). He reaches for the scent of the apple and the spray of water. Even if, no, because that food is unreachable. The tree is not climbable. The branches widen at the peak not the base.
Today, with so much available at the fingertip, the poet goes thin for the tree-high thought.